Sunday, June 3, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday #5


“It’s too late now, genius.  I swallowed it.”  Rebecca laughed and broke open an Edamame bean.  She licked the salt off the pod and sucked the three little soybeans into her mouth.  When she glanced up from her food she couldn’t help but smirk.  Robert had frozen in place, chopsticks midway to his mouth, and was just watching her eat.  


This is from my upcoming novella OPEN HOUSE.  Hope you enjoyed another peek at Robert and Rebecca.  Be sure to visit www.sixsunday.com for more links to great bits!

Thanks for stopping by today!

12 comments:

  1. Ooh now I want more. Great six! Tweeted and Facebook shared.

    nikki

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  2. That's an awesome teaser of what's to come. Nice six, Krystal! :)

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  3. Great job. I think I'd stop eating, too.

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    1. Oh yes, all eating stopped shortly thereafter! LOL

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  4. LOL, very nice six. I bet he is turned on...right? Does he want to be the pod?

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  5. Whoohoo...she certainly got his attention LOL. Great six! (And I love your banner here!)

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  6. He's hooked, lol! Great six!

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  7. Funny ... at the end I realized I, too, was caught up in "watching" her eat. You really grabbed me with that description!

    Sarah Ballance

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