Sunday, July 15, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday #11


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“I forgot I have an open house today.  There’s nobody at the office to cover it, so I have to run.”
“Those don’t look like very good running shoes.” He gestured to the heels dangling from her fingers.
“Seriously?”  She considered chunking the heels at him, but he might not give them back.  

15 comments:

  1. This is such a cute exchange, and I love what the last line says about him. Great humor here!

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    1. Thanks! Robert was such a fun character to write. I can't wait for y'all to actually get to read the whole story!

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  2. Niiice six Krystal! I could totally picture the heels dangling. Great dialogue! :D

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  3. I couldn't leave a comment. Here it is if you'd like to post it.
    That was very cute. I wonder what he'd demand for return of the shoes.

    Marion/Ella

    Marion Browning-Baker
    w/a Ella Quinn

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  4. Love this exchange! It says so much about the characters - great job, Krystal!

    -Melia Alexander

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  5. Nice six and I love me a cheeky guy! Great writing - very engaging.

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  6. LOL, very cute. She'd probably chuck one shoe and he'd catch it, then were would she be *smile*

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