Sunday, July 29, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday #13

Hello and welcome back to my little corner of cyberspace! I'm so glad you are joining me today. Here's another taste of my current WIP called PRIDE RULES. Be sure to stop by www.sixsunday.com for links to more fabulous authors.

Eshe grumbled under her breath. She did not have time for annoying salesmen today.  She grabbed her purse, slung it over her shoulder, and swung open the front door. “Whatever you’re selling, I’m not–”
            
          One glance at the phenomenal specimen of man standing on her doorstep caused the 
words to catch in her throat. 

          Delicious! 

13 comments:

  1. Ooooh I want to see the delicious guy!

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  2. Oh, boy am I ever trying to look around her to see whose outside! LOL. Great hook!

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  3. I can hear the record scratching noise and her eyes take him in. Great six! :c)

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  4. Ha, very nice teaser! Can't wait till next week.

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  5. This takes me back to yesterday. Lol. An alarm salesman came to my door. Kept me out there talking for 10 minutes. I was like please go away in my mind. BUT if he would have looked like your hero, I'm sure I would not have minded. Lol

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  6. Fantastic 6! Yes, let's see this delicious man candy!! ;)

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