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“Correction,” she
snapped viciously, “Half-breed and not worthy to be called a lion.”
He stood silent.
Eshe waited for him to say something, but he didn’t. He just stood there
staring at her.
Finally he broke the silence. “He said you weren’t a shifter, but I
didn’t believe him.
Yikes. Talk about tense!
ReplyDeleteOuch...talk about tension. Great six!
ReplyDeleteI agree. There is a lot of tension there. Nice six! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat six! Interesting tension.
ReplyDeleteNicely done. The conflict rolls from each line. I like the contrast between her knife-like anger and what I sense is quiet study in his reply. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteInteresting excerpt, a lot of emotion at play in such a short span of time! Great six!
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